2. I think that the subject I picked is one which will make a interesting paper
Work on: 1. I think that one of the biggest areas I need to work on is to clarify my thoughts, include more explination, and unpack the writing.
Going to read through the paper t0 see where I could clarify ceartin sections.
Try to get my thoughts out of my head and on to the paper so that the reader will not have to make any leaps in thought process.
2. Also I need to work on my transitions in order to make my paper flow better, and to allow the reader to easily understand my thought process.
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